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Comical moment - giving the play some balance between the light (Ton's hope) and the dark (his doubt/past).
Lynn - 'How do you always manage to bring everything back to you?'
Ton - 'You asked, remember'
Lynn (rolls eyes)
Clear instructions for actor - I am bringing the characters I've created to life, through features such as stage directions. For example:
Ton - 'Oi, do you think my life only consists of disasters?' (serious tone and expression)
Creating my characters has been my favourite part of the script writing process.
EBI:
Less cliche dialogue (romance) - it is currently lacking some realism. In reality, the relationship is turbulent and to an extent, destructive.
No movement direction
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